14 May 2010

Here i`m posting some of the work, but NOTHING is completely finished....

the red text means that has to be write again, and in some part it helps me just to see how much space is taking....
at 06:57

3 comments:

  1. alice labadini16 May 2010 at 15:30

    hei simona!
    I think the section represent your systems and the spatial transitions between them much more strongly! I like it. You can put the same arrows as before in.. I am looking forward to see your conclusive steps as well, like you started last week. Your landscapes have very interestig names and descriptions, I think you should try also to say what spaces they will create, what they will be like when implemented on site.. how will the landscape be transformed? Also in scale? Is your forest-like protected area a belt of 10 meters of deciduous forest? Or is it a marsh-like forest of high reed? What is permaculture there? Is it fields of food with no fertilizers, acting as a protective area for the runoff water? Does it do something else? How big is it? If you have the possibility to say something about it, would be really interesting! And - just as a small add-on, but even if you didn't find anything about old farms, I think you could insert a poiunt in your strategy about the conservation of cultural landscapes - they are precious for the birds - also - ask Maia :-) good luck!

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  2. Unknown18 May 2010 at 03:49

    Hey Simona!
    I admire your structure and your ability to show your information and thoughts so clearly! The two last drawings are fun and easy to understand, good job!

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  3. KED19 May 2010 at 06:30

    Dear Simona
    I admire the clearness and offensive character of your six strategies network. And I look forward to your refined graphics.
    At the same time you introudce urban gardens, natural reserves and permacultural farms as new neighbours to the "urban" community. Will you explore more what this is. What kind of transformed lansdscapes will this be when you move out of the cartography. These strategies of yours opens for a new kind of urban life in the community at stake, and also for a transfomation in the community itself. You create som new possiblities so to speak. How will you show us this appearing landscape? Sections or other type of in depth visualizing?

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